This is a class blog for Dr. Kristen Alley Swain's journalism students who produce video stories about sustainability issues in the Oxford-Ole Miss community.
I think that this video was put together well, and the people being interviewed gave good insight into the topic. One thing that could have been done that would make it better is to introduce the people being interviewed with a voice over or add a title on the screen. It was a little confusing when the story just jumped into the first interview without any introduction.
i think the interviews get kind of long. you could splice them up a little and mix in voiceovers. Also better transitions between interview sources would help. good b-roll.
I think that this video was put together well, and the people being interviewed gave good insight into the topic. One thing that could have been done that would make it better is to introduce the people being interviewed with a voice over or add a title on the screen. It was a little confusing when the story just jumped into the first interview without any introduction.
ReplyDeleteGood, but you need one more interview. I like the B-roll of the biker. Also, put some captions as well.
ReplyDeletei think the interviews get kind of long. you could splice them up a little and mix in voiceovers. Also better transitions between interview sources would help. good b-roll.
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