This is a class blog for Dr. Kristen Alley Swain's journalism students who produce video stories about sustainability issues in the Oxford-Ole Miss community.
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November 12, 2010
2 interview/event footage placeholders, want to rework more quotes and stats into V/O. accidentally cleared my throat at beginning: will fix this.gy.
I think your voice over is a little too long and wordy. There are some unecessary b-roll shots throughout the video. I like how you showed the bike map when you had the woman being interviewed. Technical things to fix would be the black box on the left side of the screen and the last 30 seconds that has no sound.
I think your voice over is a little too long and wordy. There are some unecessary b-roll shots throughout the video. I like how you showed the bike map when you had the woman being interviewed. Technical things to fix would be the black box on the left side of the screen and the last 30 seconds that has no sound.
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