This is a class blog for Dr. Kristen Alley Swain's journalism students who produce video stories about sustainability issues in the Oxford-Ole Miss community.
good video but it needs to be a little longer, and with one more interview this could be easy. It might help to add some more explanation with voice overs. The ending shot of the Historic Preservation Committee is confusing.
I thought that this topic was very interesting and the interviews were very good and gave great insight into the topic. One thing I think could be added to make it a little better is some more b roll with some voiceovers explaining the next slide or scene.
I really like the b-roll at the beginning with the voice-over of the Oxford resident. Also, I thought your sources were really relevant and the shot with the Chairman was really good. I think if you changed the ending to have the clip with the Oxford resident talking about how saving the environment is more important than worrying about changing Oxford's appearance then the ending would have more of an impact.
This video is very informative. The video is not very clear. The sources you interviewed were very informative as well. You could end the video with summing up the whole idea of the video, and this would make the video longer. Good job!
overall a good video. i think you could use some more b-roll. and i think some editing would help smooth out the rough transitions.
ReplyDeletegood video but it needs to be a little longer, and with one more interview this could be easy. It might help to add some more explanation with voice overs. The ending shot of the Historic Preservation Committee is confusing.
ReplyDeleteI thought that this topic was very interesting and the interviews were very good and gave great insight into the topic. One thing I think could be added to make it a little better is some more b roll with some voiceovers explaining the next slide or scene.
ReplyDeleteI really like the b-roll at the beginning with the voice-over of the Oxford resident. Also, I thought your sources were really relevant and the shot with the Chairman was really good. I think if you changed the ending to have the clip with the Oxford resident talking about how saving the environment is more important than worrying about changing Oxford's appearance then the ending would have more of an impact.
ReplyDeleteThis video is very informative. The video is not very clear. The sources you interviewed were very informative as well. You could end the video with summing up the whole idea of the video, and this would make the video longer. Good job!
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