This is a class blog for Dr. Kristen Alley Swain's journalism students who produce video stories about sustainability issues in the Oxford-Ole Miss community.
Good job on the video. Like the other person said, the music is a little distracting. Also, the footage is shaky. If you can, I would try to reshoot it using a tripod or a more steady hand.
The video could also use another interview, maybe from someone that uses rebel redals. Also, I would add a title for the video with your names at the beginning as well as a caption for the interview. -Todd
Interview someone who actually benefits from Rebel Pedals. Also, the background music is too loud and you can't understand your interview source. I had no idea what he was said about the program.
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ReplyDeleteI got that the video was about Rebel Pedals, but there were not enough sources/interviews.
Paul
great b-roll i thought. the music is nice at the beginning but becomes very distracting when the interview starts.
ReplyDeleteGood job on the video. Like the other person said, the music is a little distracting. Also, the footage is shaky. If you can, I would try to reshoot it using a tripod or a more steady hand.
ReplyDeleteThe video could also use another interview, maybe from someone that uses rebel redals. Also, I would add a title for the video with your names at the beginning as well as a caption for the interview.
-Todd
Interview someone who actually benefits from Rebel Pedals. Also, the background music is too loud and you can't understand your interview source. I had no idea what he was said about the program.
ReplyDeleteMary Gelwix
I really liked the opening shot. The volume of the music should probably be lowered during the interview, however.
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