This is a class blog for Dr. Kristen Alley Swain's journalism students who produce video stories about sustainability issues in the Oxford-Ole Miss community.
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April 28, 2011
Solar Research Projects at Ole Miss- Mason McMillion
The information is very interesting but the work did seem to be missing something. There could have been some video or image of a solar panel being put to use. The interview source is knowledgeable but should have had not slouched during the interview.
The scenery of the interview could have been better too instead of a plain background maybe it should have been in a lab with other students working on projects or even outside.
The information is very interesting but the work did seem to be missing something. There could have been some video or image of a solar panel being put to use. The interview source is knowledgeable but should have had not slouched during the interview.
ReplyDeleteThe scenery of the interview could have been better too instead of a plain background maybe it should have been in a lab with other students working on projects or even outside.
maybe some more b-roll and more sources. Good beginning to the video. overall, not a bad start- P.B
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